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[GAME][2.3+] Fall with parachute :]

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By wakeUpStudio, Junior Member on 26th May 2014, 02:15 AM
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Hi guys, i want present my first game. I created it one. Genre: arcade. it's free, there's little advertising.
You - skydiver falling from a great height. Your task is not to crash into the rocks and branches.

rus/eng language.

Upd. 3.6.14:
- Add buttons controll.
- Fixed another problems.


Screenshots:





Sorry, but i can't add normal link, because add this (this is not spam, as you can see) :

_https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.wakeupstudio.game - Link for Google Play
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26th May 2014, 12:20 PM |#2  
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Just tried it. Funny game. I like the hand drawn character .
Pretty good first effort.

A few things I noticed:
* There are typos in the tutorial
* You should try to optimize it as it seems to lag a bit
* Is that Keanu on your icon? You may want to change it so you don't run into any copyright issues.
26th May 2014, 02:11 PM |#3  
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Originally Posted by frikec

Just tried it. Funny game. I like the hand drawn character .
Pretty good first effort.

A few things I noticed:
* There are typos in the tutorial
* You should try to optimize it as it seems to lag a bit
* Is that Keanu on your icon? You may want to change it so you don't run into any copyright issues.

First of all, thank u for the comment =) I would appreciate u for naming those typos.Can u show me it please? I have some problems with my english))
26th May 2014, 02:57 PM |#4  
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Originally Posted by wakeUpStudio

First of all, thank u for the comment =) I would appreciate u for naming those typos.Can u show me it please? I have some problems with my english))

Sure.

On second tutorial screen. "Available after 17.5 km/h speed is riched". You probably meant available after reaching the speed of 17.5
Same screen, "lossing" should be "losing"

Also the back button doesn't work in game scene.

Hope this helps.
26th May 2014, 04:47 PM |#5  
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Originally Posted by frikec

Sure.

On second tutorial screen. "Available after 17.5 km/h speed is riched". You probably meant available after reaching the speed of 17.5
Same screen, "lossing" should be "losing"

Also the back button doesn't work in game scene.

Hope this helps.

ty, I'll fix it.
Man, I updated the game, you used an older version. please download the new version
3rd June 2014, 11:10 PM |#6  
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Update
Have new version!
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