the 5 fail to mount SD card is normal, like I said in my last post, you don't have an SD card that's why its failing to mount it.
if you are trying to manually apply the OTA it wont work unless you are S-OFF, if you are S-ON then you will just have to wait till HTC send it to you.
"Check cid failed! means you have downloaded the wrong update for your device, your phone CID and the update CID don't match, for this very reason I suggest you stay S-ON, because if you were s-OFF it would of flashed it and your phone would now be bricked.